I've got a logo for a cleaning company in the pipeline, I may just steal this and change the name Seriously though I think the white one is better but I would like to see them allot bigger, can you pop them up at a higher res?
I didn't add the sparkle cause I thought it was a bit cheesey and been done loads already, and wanted to keep it different, the sparkle would only add to what the name can tell you, where the floral symbol adds the fresh element, does that make sense?
we're just trying to help, you came for feedback but as you seem to be ignoring the bit about the flower (more than one person raised the issue) just go present it to your client and let them decide then.
I like the logo Wrighty but agree that magenta doesn't work on cyan, the white version is cool but can also understand the astrix point too, maybe even rotating it a bit would help? don't think it's too big an issue either way but magenta on cyan is a defo no, no.
I live in Camberley too, might see the cleaning company around or maybe you down the carps sometime.
I quite like the logo, and agree with Andy about rotating the symbol, this might help it appear less asterix like? As for the name, I guess you don't have control over this, but a shorter second line would allow the text to go bigger, as think the word cleaning is a bit too small at the moment, wonder if 'Neat Cleaning Co.' would be better, so 'Cleaning Co.' could be a fair bit larger then, and maybe easier to see it's cleaning as a result?
Cheers for the extra feedback guys. I thought over the comment of the sparkle and thought it was cheesey, but think if I add it, in a nice way, it might look ok, as the floral symbol has not gone down too well.
Greg: Thanks for the thoughts mate, but I can't change the name, as they have registered cleaning services, and that's the name they gave me, but good idea!
I have made a few tweaks, to the font too, as the balance of the 't' was driving me mad. Let me know your thoughts. Cheers.