Hey everyone! I'm finally submitting something to critique! I just wanted to get some feedback on how this is feeling. It's for the HOW Design Veteran's grant which, if I won, would award me with a paid trip (minus food) to the HOW Conference in September. I'm sure I'll have a lot of competition in it, but it's worth a shot! I have to list out my "reasons" still, but this is where I'm at. Any feedback is appreciated.