@GCarlD
Well-Known Member
Yes its good, definitely better. I see you've taken on board what I've said 
I'm sure DOB is actually needed on a CV but not your nationality. I have never seen a CV without DOB on it or age.
Just need some fine tuning; sort out your tracking, make sure everything is lined up and you may want to think about using a slightly less saturated colour, as that green literally looks luminous on my phone. (Not that your CV will be viewed from a phone, but maybe a tablet, you never know).
Overall, nice job man!
I'm sure DOB is actually needed on a CV but not your nationality. I have never seen a CV without DOB on it or age.Just need some fine tuning; sort out your tracking, make sure everything is lined up and you may want to think about using a slightly less saturated colour, as that green literally looks luminous on my phone. (Not that your CV will be viewed from a phone, but maybe a tablet, you never know).
Overall, nice job man!