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    LOGO! (In Progress)

    Logo It's seems quiite familier, maybe you could make it more original with a more unususal typeface. Maybe it could be a Logo type.
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    T-shirt design

    This is an idea that I had for a t-shirt design. I wanted to see if I could design a modern day blacksploitation image. Just want to see if people like it and if there is anything that I could improve. Thanks
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    Would like some advice/critique

    logo Excuse the previous message, I meant that I didn't like the colour of the bear,it would look better a more bear like colour, and that background should be less intrusive. Sorry !!!!
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    Would like some advice/critique

    Logo Hi, I like the bear, but I think it would look better without the blue background. I like the black and white version best, and so I think that you could make the background less intrusive. Maybe you could find a typeface that stands out a little more. Hope this helpful
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    Dance Posters

    Hi, I previously submitted a series of dance posters, that I wanted some opinions on before adding them to my portfolio, as a replacement for a series of posters that I created during, the HND I have just graduated from. I have changed them. The idea this time is to depict Latin dances...
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    Potential? You tell me!

    hi Hi, I like the logo as it's simple, but I think the cherry should be more prominent. I think that the colour is a little pale, would be better in a colour that catches the eye more, maybe something warm like red. I think that it would be better to use 2 typefaces. It has...
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    work in progress

    They are an experient for my portfolo, wanted look at same subject 3 different ways, they are to much alike. thanks for the critique
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    work in progress

    Hi, You wanted to know the background, basically this is an experiment with typography, that I intend to use to replace some posters in my portfolio. I deceided to create 3 Tango posters, because I wanted to approach the same subject from slightly different angles. I think perhaps they are...
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    Logo and company name critique

    The second logo stands out, but the name doen't work, it sounds like a dog breed, doesn't roll off the tongue. Need a name that connects to business.
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    work in progress

    I have just graduated from a Graphic design HND and I am creating some work for my resume. These posters are a work in progress. Can tell you me what you like and what you don't, so that I may improve the work. Thanks
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