work in progress

[steadman]

I have just graduated from a Graphic design HND and I am creating some work for my resume.

These posters are a work in progress.


Can tell you me what you like and what you don't, so that I may improve the work.

Thanks

 

[LovesPrint]

Can you give us a bit more background? what's the brief and purpose of them?

 

[Ozwaldo Sanchez]

Not knowing the background et al. the middle image has some potential. I'd try:
A different font - something with a bit more flow and eligance, to emulate the movement of the dancers
A different colour - Green is ok, but it looks like a standard pallette choice of an rgb colour in an cmyk document.
A bit of transparency... may be? on the text? ?
The text treatment is a bit static

 

[steadman]

Can you give us a bit more background? what's the brief and purpose of them?

Hi,

You wanted to know the background, basically this is an experiment with typography, that I intend to use to replace some posters in my portfolio. I deceided to create 3 Tango posters, because I wanted to approach the same subject from slightly different angles. I think perhaps they are to much alike.

 

[steadman]

Not knowing the background et al. the middle image has some potential. I'd try:
A different font - something with a bit more flow and eligance, to emulate the movement of the dancers
A different colour - Green is ok, but it looks like a standard pallette choice of an rgb colour in an cmyk document.
A bit of transparency... may be? on the text? ?
The text treatment is a bit static

They are an experient for my portfolo, wanted look at same subject 3 different ways, they are to much alike.

thanks for the critique