Hi,Can you give us a bit more background? what's the brief and purpose of them?
They are an experient for my portfolo, wanted look at same subject 3 different ways, they are to much alike.Not knowing the background et al. the middle image has some potential. I'd try:
A different font - something with a bit more flow and eligance, to emulate the movement of the dancers
A different colour - Green is ok, but it looks like a standard pallette choice of an rgb colour in an cmyk document.
A bit of transparency... may be? on the text? ?
The text treatment is a bit static