You don't need the shadows that are going on.
Take it right back to basics, use a more 'solid font' better kerning, watch the leading and use a font with a shorter X height.
These examples are just thrown together and aren't fit for submission at any means but just an example of how other...
The bottom is the best of the bunch but Id change it up completely. if thats taken to 1/4 of the size its not legible.
There are a lot of ways you could make that into a more 'solid', legible logo. Id start by lessening the kerning of Redwood.
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I agree with the V/U going to try and work with that in illustrator some how.
Yes, its B's but the over all shape is supposed to resemble a 'V'. Trying to represent shape and structure but the client doesnt want anything 'sharp'
Recently got hired to design a logo for a new business 'Bella Vista - remodelling & investments'
the name is quite long and can long awkward (im not a fan of a lot of text within a logo design but hey ho!)
Anyways... this is the outcome i've got... clearly still torn with colour ways...
Hey! in need of some major help with a logo design.
Been given a new brief for university.. its a web based project but we have to design an identity. the company has to be called 'ULTERIOR' but it can be any business so i've chosen to do a record label.
Everything I'm generating is pretty...
Id use a more solid square typeface. I don't like the way helvetica sits within the spaces.
100% id try a different type choice and go from there. Id also just make the type black and create the cube from the type & ditch the solid cube.
Nice idea but at a scale any size smaller than the current image.. it wouldn't be evident what it actually is. Its not 100% at the current size but the concept is nice. Id keep messing around with it, maybe make a vector logo but keeping the same concept.
recently finished creating my personal identity (most difficult project ever)
Any feedback or critique? this is easily the happiest i;ve been with personal identity but I'm still on the edge.
Id honestly just work with helvetica on both the title and tag
Id increase the weight on 'this is buble'
& change the performed by section to another weight of helvetica.
I dabbled in illustration for a little bit as my main source of income is apparel & merch print design.. so a bit of illustration went a long way but one company requested:
"we would like a line drawing of a skull with a spanish marion helmet on"
Me: "okay, no problem. Is it possible for you to...
Im sure theres a lot of good information on Muller_Brockman out there. he's a real stand out on grid systems. Try and find some quality info on his work
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