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Would like some advice/critique

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by mr_bear, Jul 26, 2009.

  1. mr_bear

    mr_bear New Member

    Hey all, :icon_biggrin:

    ive been playing around with a few logo designs for myself.

    i created the bear's face myself from sketch and wanted to use it as i really like it.

    below is a few examples of different variations i have come up with.

    all thoughts and ideas welcomed.

  2. CYoung

    CYoung Member

    Quite like the 1st one on the black background. Sometimes black causes problems when printing because of the dark background, but otherwise quite a friendly logo :icon_smile:
  3. mr_bear

    mr_bear New Member

    yeh, at the moment i dont intend print the logo on a black background but am working on a website with that as the main logo. (taking a while as im only just getting to grips with html and css :/

    i agree about the top right one if i do say so myself :)
  4. Stationery Direct

    Stationery Direct Administrator Staff Member

    I too prefer the one with the bear peeking from behind the lettering, also agree that a black backgorund is a bad idea.
  5. dot design

    dot design Member

    Why blue bear?
    Though I really like the bear illustration, very good. G
  6. mr_bear

    mr_bear New Member


    struggling for a name to go under, i have a nickname amongst friends of "bear" (not of the homosexual variety, the grizzly sort) and my faviourite colour being blue...

  7. Stationery Direct

    Stationery Direct Administrator Staff Member

    :icon_confused: Am I missing something really obvious here :icon_lol:
  8. dot design

    dot design Member

    I think he means he is not a 'gay' bear!
  9. Minuteman Press

    Minuteman Press Moderator

    Top right bear peeking - however, I don't like the concept. Makes your product trivial / amateur to serious buyers.
  10. dot design

    dot design Member

    This point escaped me as I was concentrating on the name, but I'd agree with Peter it does look abit amateur despite the skill you have for the illustration. the typography isn't working and the colours aren't either, sorry.
    It needs to be more professional, unless your designing bears then its spot on!
  11. mr_bear

    mr_bear New Member

    how would you suggest i make it appear more proffesional but still incorporate the bear illustration ?
  12. steadman

    steadman New Member



    I like the bear, but I think it would look better without the blue background. I like the black and white version best, and so I think that you could make the background less intrusive.

    Maybe you could find a typeface that stands out a little more.

    Hope this helpful
  13. steadman

    steadman New Member


    Excuse the previous message, I meant that I didn't like the colour of the bear,it would look better a more bear like colour, and that background should be less intrusive.

    Sorry !!!!

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