Apologies for being quiet of late, been a bit busy. Got some new work though innit: http://mattsimmondswork.com/motion/#brandfilm Would love to hear comments. The consistant comment is that it's too long, which I tend to agree with. The trouble was getting the edited dialogue to fit together and make sense whilst keeping it short. If I'd written a script for voice over I could easily have refined the copy and made it more efficient. As it was, I could only use what was said in the original conversations, which made structuring any kind of narrative a bit of a challenge.