Suggestions for improvement?


New Member
Hi I've recently done a piece of artwork for a streamer's ad on a radio website. I feel like it could be better but I don't know what it is, so was hoping for some 3rd party critique. :)


Well-Known Member
What's with the serious overbite? Don't know if it's been done on purpose, but there must be millions of skull illustrations
out there to give you inspiration. The text is a bit uninspiring too, you could really go overboard on that too.

Also, it's not really an advert, it's just a logo and an address, and if it's going quite small then the small blue text may disappear.


Active Member
Also the ad is 1500px x 500px and will be displayed at 1500px x 500px
Not on a mobile phone it won't

It's still not an ad though. It's more like a business card.

Not sure why a game streamer needs thinks their ad will work on a radio station website but it's not my call to crack on.