Suggestions for improvement?

[ARandomSoul]

Hi I've recently done a piece of artwork for a streamer's ad on a radio website. I feel like it could be better but I don't know what it is, so was hoping for some 3rd party critique.

 

[vincent007]

I think design of the logo is alright but name of it is kind of scary.

 

[Wardy]

What's with the serious overbite? Don't know if it's been done on purpose, but there must be millions of skull illustrations
out there to give you inspiration. The text is a bit uninspiring too, you could really go overboard on that too.

Also, it's not really an advert, it's just a logo and an address, and if it's going quite small then the small blue text may disappear.

 

[ARandomSoul]

@Wardy, The skull wasn’t my design, I was just asked to create the ‘ad’. I’ve filled in the blank spaces on the skull since.

 

[ARandomSoul]

@Wardy, The skull wasn’t my design, I was just asked to create the ‘ad’. I’ve filled in the blank spaces on the skull since.

Also the ad is 1500px x 500px and will be displayed at 1500px x 500px

 

[fisicx]

Also the ad is 1500px x 500px and will be displayed at 1500px x 500px

Not on a mobile phone it won't

It's still not an ad though. It's more like a business card.

Not sure why a game streamer needs thinks their ad will work on a radio station website but it's not my call to crack on.