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Poster I am working on...

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by mrp2049, Sep 21, 2010.

  1. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    Right gentlemen, I am at that point...to add detail or not to add.

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    This is a 3 colour screen printed poster and I have used 3 colours in the minor details of the playing cards, and it seems a shame to not take advantage of that throughout the detail of the design, yet I have hit a wall, where I can't think of what to do.

    What can I do to improve it whilst keeping it within the feel of what I have done so far?

    I've hit the wall. I'm going to eat dinner and come back!
     
  2. Wee Jimmy

    Wee Jimmy Senior Member

    The cards look hot. The poster doesn't really come together though.

    I would actually suggest making the ace the poster and having the info around the border where you have the intitals at the moment. Just a thought to make it stand out more
     
  3. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    I'd probably look at adding some colour to the text
     
  4. I would put some red in a select area of the text, like make "The Fleece" red
     
  5. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    I thought about this, but the dragon image (which is absolutely central to the whole thing) is to low a res to make much, if any bigger.

    And the cigar sticking out the side is the logo of the other band Madball, who are pretty big, so its kinda important to.
     
  6. Tom Sound

    Tom Sound Active Member

    You could vectorise the dragon really easily and put it big as a background :up:
     
  7. philjohns

    philjohns Senior Member

    Am I missing the "cigar" cant see it anywhere.

    My thought befre reading any posts was to make the Ace the poster too - to incorporate other logos you could put them in a corner of it as one of the symbols?

    Then but the next along each edge?
     
  8. Wee Jimmy

    Wee Jimmy Senior Member

    [​IMG]
    "Look Rich, an invisible cigar!"
     
  9. Thewholehogg

    Thewholehogg Active Member

    Nixon would steal anything.
     
  10. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    The cigar is on the 'C' card.

    General opinion is make the whole thing bigger, vectorising here we come!
     
  11. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    Completely re did the text in the end, sent it to the promoter, he is very happy. I'll post it once I have saved a smaller version!

    Oh and don't worry Anagoge/Neil (which do you prefer) I left the Trajan in!
     
  12. glenwheeler

    glenwheeler Senior Member

  13. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    I want them!
     
  14. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    I recognise this one

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    and I can't for the life of me think why.
     

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