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Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by V17, Oct 26, 2015.

  1. V17

    V17 New Member

    Hi All,

    I've been doodling and came up with a new logo for my business and would be extremely greatful for any feedback / constructive criticism you might have for me.

    The company name is "V17". Ignoring the fact that I still need to round the finishing edges of the piercing line what are your thoughts / suggestions?


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  2. Wardy

    Wardy Well-Known Member

    Apart from the fact we don't know what the company does, it barely looks like a V. It looks
    a bit like a backwards tick. Why is it crossed out?
  3. V17

    V17 New Member

    Your response says everything I needed to know. Back to the drawing board I go.

    Was supposed to be a V and a 17. If printed on a business card you'd see it from another angle.

    Atleast that was the idea. Oh well.

    I think it is a typical case of spending too long on design. Fresh eyes are needed tomorrow.

    Edit: Forgot to say thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.
  4. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    after reading that the logo was for v17 I could see exactly where you were coming from with the design. Having said that without the description I'd have struggled because to me it looks like a rotated 7 with a line going through it and 17 in roman numerals underneath.

    Try playing with angles of the 7 and the '1'... I can already see a 'triangular' design if you were to make the 7 the normal way up, think the 1 at '10 o clock' and then the 7 next to it.
  5. Wardy

    Wardy Well-Known Member

    To me, it seems strange to mix the roman numerals with modern letters and numbers. You already have a 'V' in your
    roman numerals which signifies a five, etc. Just a bit confusing.

    I would go with something really simple ie with the V being the same angle as the 7.
  6. V17

    V17 New Member

    Some really good points here, I didnt even consider the confusion between a roman numeral "V".

    I really like the triangle suggestion, being the same angle as the 7. I'll dable with that idea. Thanks!
  7. V17

    V17 New Member

    Ok, so I went back to the drawing board and couldn't make this triangle with the V17 work. I did how ever come up with this. Its generic I know and missing the 17 but I still quite like it.. Don't ask me why I just do, there's something elegant about its minimalism.

    Anyways, what do you guys think? Yay or Nay?

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  8. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    looks ok but doesn't really say v17...

    I was thinking of something more like the attached image below when I mentioned my idea above, now it needs refining (line weights, spacing etc) as it was literally a 5minute idea :)

    Not saying you should take notice of my idea but if nothing else it might give you a different direction to consider that you might not have thought of.

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  9. scotty

    scotty Well-Known Member

    That's actually rather clever. :D
  10. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    I have my moments, not often though :p
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  11. V17

    V17 New Member

    Ha! Thats really cool I didn't even think of that. Thin lines are giving it a sort of gladiator vibe but I'll experiment with the idea and post results. Thanks! :thumbup1:
  12. scotty

    scotty Well-Known Member

    I love it when that happens.
    Doesn't happen often.

    A bit like shitting a diamond.

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