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Illustration Critique

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Salma, Oct 22, 2015.

  1. Salma

    Salma New Member

    I'm starting to create independent projects for resale on sites like Creative Market and would love you guys feedback please.
    https://www.behance.net/gallery/30557503/Snailzies
    His name is Snailzies and I'm going to create more with him in various poses. I'd also like to do more patterns with different characters and create characters for resale as well. Would this be a product you think could sell?
    Thanks :)
     
  2. Wardy

    Wardy Active Member

    It's ok and looks fine as a pattern, but I'm not sure how sellable it would be.

    I think it could be a bit cuter and why has it got four eyes?
     
  3. Salma

    Salma New Member

    Thanks for the response Ian.
    I gave it 4 eyes to anthropomorphize the character a bit so he's more relatable and less creepy. Also - he's fictional so I could have put 10 eyes and 100 tentacles on him :) How would you make Snailzies cuter?
    This is the first one, so any advise would be greatly appreciated :thumb:
     
  4. Wardy

    Wardy Active Member

    I would just work on the main eyes a bit more and maybe with a smile?
     
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  5. Paul Murray

    Paul Murray Moderator Staff Member

    I didn't actually notice the eyes on stalks, they get lost a little. Personally I find it cuter with just the two eyes.
     

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