Illustration Critique

Salma

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I'm starting to create independent projects for resale on sites like Creative Market and would love you guys feedback please.
https://www.behance.net/gallery/30557503/Snailzies
His name is Snailzies and I'm going to create more with him in various poses. I'd also like to do more patterns with different characters and create characters for resale as well. Would this be a product you think could sell?
Thanks :)
 
It's ok and looks fine as a pattern, but I'm not sure how sellable it would be.

I think it could be a bit cuter and why has it got four eyes?
 
Thanks for the response Ian.
I gave it 4 eyes to anthropomorphize the character a bit so he's more relatable and less creepy. Also - he's fictional so I could have put 10 eyes and 100 tentacles on him :) How would you make Snailzies cuter?
This is the first one, so any advise would be greatly appreciated :thumb:
 
I didn't actually notice the eyes on stalks, they get lost a little. Personally I find it cuter with just the two eyes.
 
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