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Graphic design crit required

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by br3n, Dec 14, 2008.

  1. br3n

    br3n Senior Member

    Been asked to develop some wallpaper graphics for craig sparkes, Ive recently finnished a website design for him so this (1 of 4) is designed to work alongside the new-look site.

    Designed as 1280*1024 but rescaled for this topic


    source image

    Anyone got any ideas/crit? ta.
  2. rossnorthernunion

    rossnorthernunion Senior Member

    Nice - only concern is the placement of the logos.

    Maybe along the bottom? - as most mac users (havn't used a pc in years!) tend to have Hardrive / external etc icons down the right hand side.
  3. philjohns

    philjohns Senior Member

    As a mac user I agree with the above, however controversially - windows users normally have theres aligned left!

    I really like the design, to me the strings of the kite down line up with its positioning though...
  4. jHouse

    jHouse Senior Member

    You've really gone to town with the burn tool! ;)
  5. br3n

    br3n Senior Member

    I really like the dark grungy feel - do you think its over done?
  6. tim

    tim Senior Member

    personally, i don't. i think it looks dangerous and exciting so for me the grunge is just right.

    maybe i'm the ultimate in stupid tho.
  7. tbwcf

    tbwcf Active Member

    I think you've done a nice job with this and it would appeal to your target audience! - good work!
  8. tim

    tim Senior Member

    one q... where's the guys head?
  9. br3n

    br3n Senior Member

    hes kind of inverted so his head would be underneith the blue buggy - if that makes sense?

    thanks for comments guys :D
  10. blueocto

    blueocto Senior Member

    For me it wasn't clear at all what he was/doing, until you explained and supplied the original image. Just my 2p.
  11. rossnorthernunion

    rossnorthernunion Senior Member

    It's been a long time since i've touched a Peee Seeee.

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