Graphic design crit required

br3n

Senior Member
Been asked to develop some wallpaper graphics for craig sparkes, Ive recently finnished a website design for him so this (1 of 4) is designed to work alongside the new-look site.

Designed as 1280*1024 but rescaled for this topic

cswallpaper.jpg


source image
orig.jpg


Anyone got any ideas/crit? ta.
 
Nice - only concern is the placement of the logos.

Maybe along the bottom? - as most mac users (havn't used a pc in years!) tend to have Hardrive / external etc icons down the right hand side.
 
As a mac user I agree with the above, however controversially - windows users normally have theres aligned left!

I really like the design, to me the strings of the kite down line up with its positioning though...
 
personally, i don't. i think it looks dangerous and exciting so for me the grunge is just right.

maybe i'm the ultimate in stupid tho.
 
I think you've done a nice job with this and it would appeal to your target audience! - good work!
 
hes kind of inverted so his head would be underneith the blue buggy - if that makes sense?

thanks for comments guys :D
 
For me it wasn't clear at all what he was/doing, until you explained and supplied the original image. Just my 2p.
 
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