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Discussion in 'Logo Design & Brand Identity Forum:' started by TomStutt, May 29, 2009.

  1. TomStutt

    TomStutt Senior Member

    Hi All

    I have just finished my first ever logo for a competition i have entered.

    Please tell me what you think but dont be too harsh :cry:

  2. tbwcf

    tbwcf Active Member

    Hi Tom, there's no link or thumbnail....?
  3. TomStutt

    TomStutt Senior Member

    the logo is under the text i wrote. can you not see it?
  4. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    I cant see it either
  5. TomStutt

    TomStutt Senior Member

    how weird is that. i can see it under the text i wrote. its in my album under logos.
  6. nope can't see anything Tom.. sorry :(
  7. TomStutt

    TomStutt Senior Member

  8. TomStutt

    TomStutt Senior Member

    what about now.:D
  9. nope still nothing :(
  10. TomStutt

    TomStutt Senior Member

  11. Invalid Picture specified. If you followed a valid link, please notify the administrator is what i just got when I clicked on that link...
  12. tbwcf

    tbwcf Active Member

    yeap same...

    my current feedback is there's a little too much white space...
  13. LOL @ Andy
  14. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    um theres nothing in the folder either :)

    Just try adding an attachment to your next post :p
  15. berry

    berry Active Member

    ...A bit of subliminal advertising going on?
  16. Aarlev

    Aarlev Member

    Hi Tom,

    It works for me? :confused:

    Can you maybe provide us with bit more information about the logo? What is it for? What does the company do? Target audience etc.. As it will make it easier for us to give you better feedback. :)

    I'll give you some feedback based purely on my visual impressions. I think there are too many effects. I'd try it without the gloss, bevel and shadows. Also the two masks look like images and I don't think they work with the rest. I'd create them as vector illustrations instead in case you need to scale the logo and try to incorporate them in a different way. Maybe have the masks overlapping eachother on top and then have the name underneath?

    Just my 2 cents. I hope that wasn't too harsh :)

  17. tim

    tim Senior Member

    It only works for mods.. his albums are private.
  18. Aarlev

    Aarlev Member

    Ahh..right :)

    Thanks Tim :)
  19. Aarlev

    Aarlev Member

    Ok here's Tom's Logo :)

  20. captainrage

    captainrage Senior Member

    Hah, this WAS the thing on ArtsJobs.. Nice work.

    • London Closes Sun 31 May 2009 Paid (£10k-15k pro rata) Part time
      Artform: theatre, visual arts
      Contact Murray Allan


    Design a Logo for Dress Circle.
    To coincide with the launch of the new Dress Circle website, we are running a competition to design a new logo for Dress Circle.
    The Brief
    The logo will be used primarily for our new website and any online advertising. In addition we may choose to use it on letterheads, business cards and any other way we feel is appropriate.
    We are looking for a distinctive concept that fits with the brand, it's history and reputation.
    The challenge is to create a new logo that reflects the brand of Dress Circle.
    The closing date for entry is May 31st
    Normal competition rules apply. If you have any questions regarding the rules please do not hesitate to contact me.. The winner will be notified by email. The winning prize of £250 will be paid directly into your bank account or by another agreeable means.

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