Just finished this design for a client, please let me know what you all think and if there's anything I could do to improve it The copy is straight from the client, but I'll probably be changing a few bits a pieces, feel free to comment on that too.
The colour scheme is matched to the colours of their website and logo. The colours weren't chosen to make it look like DWP material. It doesn't have a link to their website, partly because the client didn't ask for it to be on there and the URL is in the email address anyway. But I see your point, I might add it in shortly.
Another colour Balders? I've used some lighter shades of orange around the design, do you still think it needs an entirely new colour adding to it?
Yeah I'd missed the 'you' earlier.
I think it looks alright, print design isn't my strong suit to be honest but I'm happy with it.
The image is bugging me a little too, I understand that a better one could be used but unfortunately this is a bit of a rush job. The grey in their logo is horrible and clashes terribly, but unfortunately Mr. Client hasn't let me make them a new logo, yet.. You know, better to get all your stuff printed first and then get a new logo.... I'll never understand why clients think that branding should come after putting in all the hard work to set up your business.
Here is what they were originally going to use:
Hey Sean, its lookin pretty good. Things I'd pick out would be:
"Helping you path the way to your career" could maybe do with being larger. Maybe try it to the top edge of the page so it doesn't cover what they are looking at?
Should the text actually read "Helping you PAVE the way to your career"?
The line at the bottom is a touch too small and lost I'd say.
Looking a millions times better than what they were originally rolling with so good job.
Thanks Davo, It has been sent off for print now, so thanks to all that have helped. I changed the text to pave, made the bottom line a little more prominent and adjust the image so that the focal point wasn't covered up so much.
I tried it with the text at the top on the top edge of the photo but it didn't look quite right. Thanks again all