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A Quirk Of The Brain

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by J0GA, Jan 9, 2010.

  1. J0GA

    J0GA Member


    What do you think?
  2. Aarlev

    Aarlev Member

    Hi J0GA,

    Looks great! Nice photo manipulation and typography. I feel it lacks more of a focal point however. The butterfly is competing too much for attention with the frog because of the vibrant blue colour and placement I think. Perhaps you could also try to add some more graphical elements behind the frog? Some more vegetation or something?

    May I ask what it's for, or is it just a personal project?
  3. J0GA

    J0GA Member

    Hi Aarlev!

    Thanks for the feedback! I think you're right in both cases. I've made this work 1 year ago and it was just a personal project. But now you give me this feedback I indeed have to say you're right.

  4. Jimlad

    Jimlad Well-Known Member

    Yeah I'd be tempted to tone the butterfly right down to a fairly desaturated and lighter blue, and really crank up the vibrance on and around the frog, make him really (oh dear) leap off the page! It's a really nice contrast of visual elements altogether though.
  5. J0GA

    J0GA Member

    Thanks for the feedback Jimlad! :)
  6. jim

    jim Member

    I'm loving the ambiguity of seeing this on screen.

    It looks like it could be 3d as in real objects, not digital, mixed with printed matter and paint. But now it's on screen as well. It seems to contain all sorts of processes, which really appeals to me.

    I think to resolve the focus issue, the frog should be tripled in size. Yes, you 'reddit' right; tripled.


    sorry about the joke.
  7. J0GA

    J0GA Member

    Thanks! And no problem! I don't understand the joke so ... I'm not that good at english ^^ sorry :p
  8. Ant

    Ant Member

    Well reddit is a site for User-generated news links.

    Anyways, the piece is great. I really like it. Always been a fan of photo manip. So keep it up!
  9. J0GA

    J0GA Member

    Really thank you! :)
  10. jim

    jim Member

    And Reddit is the noise a frog makes....sometimes..

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