What is your opinion about this two poster?

[tooraj]

Hi
This two poster is about marketing.
Middle sentence is Persian that means it is the selling graphic products Online. This sentence should translate to English because it is incorrect. Except this sentence language that it makes a mistake please you say to me this two design problem. I want a list of problems of this two poster.
Thank you very much

 

[Christa Elrod]

Try to change the gradient color in the first poster.

 

[Levi]

In my opinion it's lacking an understanding of the fundamentals of design
Sub headings are all different sizes, this gives greater emphasis to some more than others when I assume they're all supposed to be equal on the site.
You've got background text which is quite prominent in terms of strength of colour/opacity etc
Multiple issues with 'white space' to allow items to breath
Using what is now dated 'glossy' elements