Pls give me feedback on my business cards

[jongkuvrouw]

Hello,

Please give me constructive criticism on the different business cards Ive created. Thank you in advance

 

[jongkuvrouw]

Hello,

Please give me constructive criticism on the different business cards Ive created. Thank you in advance

I would also like to ask if there was a particular design that caught your attention and why ? Was there one that you didn't like? If so, what could be improved ?

 

[eebo]

The last one is IMO the most attractive and had the best layout with the yellow one as the back, but you need to tweak a little things to make it better, first always try to middle the text in the space u put it in make sure it's centered in it's design space and to be specific the name
"ANGELA CORES" You will see it needs to go left a little to make it even from both sides, also the main company name needs to be centered correctly just a nudge down, such things can be caught by eye and give the feeling that there is something off with the design, so make sure u balance spaces and position your design elements right to get more complete and professional feeling, Good luck.

 

[hankscorpio]

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I'll just leave that there.

 

[Levi]

You've LITERALLY taken another companies logo and used it as your own...

 

[jongkuvrouw]

You've LITERALLY taken another companies logo and used it as your own...

I didn't. It's supposed to be a design for a company in the Caribbean that is a part of Yello Page. Im only using it to practice. Nothing else

 

[hankscorpio]

No problem if it's for practice - we didn't know that. I saw the icon and instantly recognised it.

Yello Media company are an actual company using this actual icon - which is disturbing.

 

[jongkuvrouw]

No problem if it's for practice - we didn't know that. I saw the icon and instantly recognised it.

Yello Media company are an actual company using this actual icon - which is disturbing.

Yes, thank you. May i receive your feedback, pls ?

 

[jongkuvrouw]

The last one is IMO the most attractive and had the best layout with the yellow one as the back, but you need to tweak a little things to make it better, first always try to middle the text in the space u put it in make sure it's centered in it's design space and to be specific the name
"ANGELA CORES" You will see it needs to go left a little to make it even from both sides, also the main company name needs to be centered correctly just a nudge down, such things can be caught by eye and give the feeling that there is something off with the design, so make sure u balance spaces and position your design elements right to get more complete and professional feeling, Good luck.

Im a couple of weeks late, but thank you very much. I appreciate your feedback!!