Design wise seems fine... I like it. :icon_smile:
My money would be on the content... not to keen on the third person take, did you write it yourself, or did you hire someone to write it for you?
Like Helen said I think the design is fine, it's a nice looking site. However, I did find some of the text difficult to read because it was too small; It looks like there is too much anti aliasing on it as it's really fuzzy. Also some of the text didn't stand out enough from the backgrounds, namely on the Recommendation, Web and Print pages.
You have got some really nice work in your portfolio but I cant click on them to make them bigger, maybe incorporating a light box or similar would help?
Other than that I like the animation it's a great looking site. :icon_smile:
I don't think there's much wrong with the design or the content, quite the contrary, looks great to me. But when a job is advertised, these days, there's usually a recruitment / selection process involved, which mostly works by progressive filtration and elimination of applications.
A very minor thing, but seeing as others have brought it up: I don't think it matters much if you use 1st or 3rd person, but I'd be consistent - 3rd person in the body of the text conflicts with the "About Me" in the menu.
I haven't found out what your surname is, either, and it's definitely not a good idea to make people work hard to extract information from a site like that.
I worked summers in Blackpool Tower when I was about what I imagine your age to be, so I really enjoyed the animation.