Newspaper redesign critique

Luke Forestmaster

New Member
Hello, I work on a newspaper for Cardiff University in the UK. Basically I'm not an expert designer, but over the past year I have learned a heck of a lot about design because of making this newspaper. In that last few months we have redesigned it and I wondered if anyone fancied giving it a look over. I think the area of most concern is pages 2-3 which act as a contents page, but yeah any suggestions would be great :)

You can find the paper at the link here:

gair rhydd - Issue 991

P.S. I am aware of the subjective nature of the request but just as a bouncing of ideas it would be great to get outsider input.