Need some remarks.

[sam@samraza.co.uk]

Hi People,

I am new here, would love some feeback.

Thanks in advance.

Sam

 

[spottypenguin]

I don't mind either of them but I am not sure the first one (for little'uns) would be appealing enough to a younger audience; yeh the parents ultimately fund it but you want the kids to notice it so they can whine to their parents "Mummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I want to.........". Just seems lik a design for an older audience to me. But that's just me.

I get what you're trying to get at with the second one but I dont know whether the black cryton effect is a bit too dark / heavy??

Anyway that's just me; I'm sure loads of people will love them :icon_thumbup: