I think your portfolio has some strong ideas and the attention to detail on your work is good. There are a few designs that are a bit too simplistic but overall I think you should definitely get some interviews from it.
I'm not keen on the home page photograph. You are trying to get your first job in design and therefore your home page should reflect some elements of your design work (not every potential employer will take the time to go any further than your home page).
I would also make the text on your home page much easier to read (it doesn't have to be so indepth) and a large tel / email address to make it easier for employers to contact you. You could also add a link to your CV.
My advice to any young designers looking for a job, is to make everything super easy for potential employers - most people don't have very much time and if they even visit your website, they might only spend 10 secs looking at it - you need to wow them straightaway.