Hi Maddy
Not sure about this one, I think the colour palette is abit harsh and doesn't really work. The typeface is quite obvious/cliché and is used alot when it comes to this theme of weddings. The whole thing looks a little cliparty
I think this logo needs to be very well designed as its acting as a sort of taster to what work the customers can expect to receive from a "wedding stationery designer" sorry I can't be more positive!
I'd suggest a more classic with hint of contemporary look, use modern but suitable colours maybe a light grey or shade of grey with a purple or violet possibly.
For course this is just my view and others may think I'm wrong, what does anyone else think?
Gareth