Hi Maddy

Not sure about this one, I think the colour palette is abit harsh and doesn't really work. The typeface is quite obvious/cliché and is used alot when it comes to this theme of weddings. The whole thing looks a little cliparty

I think this logo needs to be very well designed as its acting as a sort of taster to what work the customers can expect to receive from a "wedding stationery designer" sorry I can't be more positive!

I'd suggest a more classic with hint of contemporary look, use modern but suitable colours maybe a light grey or shade of grey with a purple or violet possibly.

For course this is just my view and others may think I'm wrong, what does anyone else think?

I drew the flower as they specialise in flower images on their stationery and I chose the typeface as they are a company that are quite classic in their approach to their designs. I think violet is a cliche wedding colour so chose a fresh blue and I think it goes well with the black but think the black could look better as a mid grey.

Thanks for your criticism.