Logo and business card design

[biju]

Hey Biju, thanks for your help! I made a different business card. What do you think?

First, you can use a different color schema. The current color scheme is a bit busy. You could try using a simpler color scheme, such as black and white or two complementary colors. You could add a plain and simple font. Popular choices include Helvetica, Arial, Futura, and Proxima Nova. Check an example!

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Please do not recreate artwork - we do not allow this. The artwork needs to be done by the OP.

 

[hankscorpio]

Please accept my sincere gratitude; I did not claim it as my own. I created an Idea. This is simple and wonderful. I've made a payment for this design. However, I'm aware of your cautionary advice.

Yes - indeed - we can all do that

Typically we don't allow redesigns of other peoples work, nevermind posting an example of the work that you paid for from someone else.

https://www.graphicdesignforums.co.uk/pages/ForumRules/

 

[Maria]

Please accept my sincere gratitude; I did not claim it as my own. I created an Idea. This is simple and wonderful. I've made a payment for this design. However, I'm aware of your cautionary advice.

Hey, thanks for your reply, my document is in RGB because I have to use RGB for my assignment and use only 2 Pantone colors. I changed it a little bit. What do you think? I like the wave. I get that hankscorpio doesn't like it, but I still like it

 

[biju]

First, you can use a different color schema. The current color scheme is a bit busy. You could try using a simpler color scheme, such as black and white or two complementary colors. You could add a plain and simple font. Popular choices include Helvetica, Arial, Futura, and Proxima Nova. Check an example!

<moderator note>
Please do not recreate artwork - we do not allow this. The artwork needs to be done by the OP.

I apologize; I designed it myself. The outline is provided below.

(removed by moderator - please don't post works - describe your idea to the OP and how they can proceed)

 

[biju]

Hey, thanks for your reply, my document is in RGB because I have to use RGB for my assignment and use only 2 Pantone colors. I changed it a little bit. What do you think? I like the wave. I get that hankscorpio doesn't like it, but I still like it

I understand that you needed to use RGB for your assignment and only 2 Pantone colors. That definitely adds some constraints, but I think you'll work with them well.

 

[hankscorpio]

I understand that you needed to use RGB for your assignment and only 2 Pantone colors. That definitely adds some constraints, but I think you'll work with them well.

No - it doesn't work well and is an erroneous workflow.