Jokey Banner Critque

[CYoung]

Hi, I made this for personal use only, just trying out a few ideas. This one is basically a jokey sort of thing, I need to add some form of illustration really.
I don't know if people will get the joke but I tried to split up the text to show a conversational sort of idea.

 

[designer01]

I like it. Got it immediately. It's because you've used grey and black. Looking good. Maybe put the other speech in speech marks as well though.

Regards


Greg

 

[CYoung]

The Jesus symbol itself I will be changing as it isn't mine, but I have something similar in mind.

I'm glad people understand it, I didn't know how cryptic it was. But thanks :icon_smile:

 

[LovesPrint]

I like it, tickled me straight away. I think it's got the perfect attitude and hit the nail on the head! :icon_biggrin: