Hi Ric,
Overall compostion works. Think your spacing is ok too good use of colour
The 'Your vision | Our Expertise' looks like it could benefit from a slightly weightier font. Maybe a medium? I like to choose a typeface that has a lot of
variations in weight and style.
Is the opening paragraph justified? I would have it left aligned, personally not a fan of justified unless in a magazine or something along those lines.
Think the bullet point text could do with enlarging a little and possibly develop some icons for each? or lift one from the background.
Either that or redraw yourself, that way the bullet points will link as examples of what is on offer from the pool of skills within the background then suggests
that there are lots more on offer. So as an example Cloud storage the obvious one being a cloud, security a key or padlock.
I presume the guy has been lifted from a coloured background and feathered? or have you added an inner glow or some sort of effect within photoshop?
It is the feathered effect what is the visual distraction. Sharp edges are fine, I would maybe give a very subtle drop shadow with like 28% opacity or something,
then pick a blue from the background as opposed to the harsh black normally used. Knock some other concepts out but with another bloke on it or with a girl or both.
I agree the yellow is lost and looks a little out of place. I would use the colour picker and select a colour from the existing image/background.
That way you will keep the colour palette the same within the whole document. Depending on the subject matter 3-4 colours is often enough.
I would also have that number in a bold have it really punchy and standing out. That is afterall the focus of the piece to get them calling?
Hope something of use there
Damian
