How can I make this sexier?

[Zola.]

I am working on a concept that was given to me to draw up about a product...I have removed some information for sensitive issues.... the attached is what I have so far... and I am not happy with it.

The concept is this product has some inner core features which then serve out to the wider world in various industries.

What other way could I tackle this? Appreciate any advice or ideas.

Many thanks
Zola

 

[Wardy]

It really depends what your skill levels are. There's far too much white space for starters and your images need to be uniform in style. If you Google 'infographics',
there's plenty of ideas for you out there. It's very difficult for us to make suggestions in words without actually designing it ourselves.

 

[Stationery Direct]

 

[Paul Murray]

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You beat me to it!

 

[Zola.]

Looks like jail bait to me!

Thanks though... but any proper suggestions? There is way too mcuh dead space for me :/ . maybe the concept itself it wrong...

 

[hankscorpio]

All those stations - looks kinda like a monopoly board.

Maybe you could do it in that sort of style???

There's a mixture of photos and icons - which probably unbalances the whole thing anyway.

There's literealy 1000's of diagrams you can draw inspiration from
https://www.istockphoto.com/ie/photos/circle-infographics?phrase=circle infographics


I think a bit of colour and things like that would go a long way.

 

[Wardy]

Like I said before, It's too complicated for us to put into words, I would have to sit down with a pencil and paper first.
I suggest that's what you do once you've researched Infographics a bit. Concentric circles probably not the way to go.