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mimoza_79

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The logo is for coffee company in Kenia.
This is a design for cofee company. The target market is young student between 21-25
years old. The cofee is organic sustainable- it is important part of the brand, but the clien dont want to look stereo typically green. I have just 5 days for that and the budjet is tight. Would you help me with advice please. The logo can not contant any graphics.Thank you:)
 

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I'll be honest I think it looks amateur, don't really have anything constructive to say other than start again unfortunately, sorry. Look at other companies in the same industry to get some ideas and try again, logo design isn't something that can be rushed in a few days.
 
mimoza_79 said:
The logo is for coffee company in Kenia.
This is a design for cofee company. The target market is young student between 21-25
years old. The cofee is organic sustainable- it is important part of the brand, but the clien dont want to look stereo typically green. I have just 5 days for that and the budjet is tight. Would you help me with advice please. The logo can not contant any graphics.Thank you:)
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Hey mimoza_79,

I'm guessing this isn't for a real company, is this for a project at school\college?

You say there is a tight budget only 5 days to produce a logo that doesn't use graphics and want advise? and also I find it hard to believe a coffee company would be targeting that specific group (but I get surprised about things all the time)

First...if the design brief states don't use graphics "DON'T use graphics" you have those (what look like orange and lime slices) between the words...get rid of them.

Change the type face, it will never be taken seriously

My advise is that in order to produce a good logo you need a lot more time and if it is a real client they need to factor this time into whatever time frame they are (presumably) working on :)

Research...start by searching for coffee company logos and see what type they use.
 
mimoza_79 said:
This is for school project :). I try to rework but hopefully these are better :)
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Do you have to provide written\verbal evidence showing the process you took in the development of the logo and why you decided to design the logo in this particular way?

if you do, show that you have done some research, Google search etc, also you've asked the design community for feedback on a design and adjusted your designs based on constructive feedback

good luck
 
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