Delta-Design
New Member
Hi everyone, first time poster here.
I'll keep it as brief as I can. I graduated little over two years ago with a degree in graphic design and illustration. I am struggling to find work and am still stuck in my part time retail job. Recently, via Twitter, I was able to get my first real client. She wants a logo for her photography website. The name is 'Love Photography' and she sent me a basic mockup of what she wants it to look like. It was simply both words typed in a handwritten font and a heart inside the letter O. I asked her what she photographs, what tone she wants her brand to exude and for examples that she likes. After three different drafts of at least 12 different designs each time, she was quite hard to get any feedback out of. Recently, due to personal reasons, I was unable to work on it and sent her an email to keep her updated. After a few days, I sent her a more refined idea with a few variations. I had changed the letter O to be both a heart and a camera lens. In my email, I detailed the concept, showed several fonts that I had downloaded specifically for the project and asked for some feedback. The very next day, she replied with a very short email with the original mockup attached, saying 'please recreate this in black on white and white on black.'
Now, I'm not that amazing at logo design and like I say have never had a client before, so I can't afford to lose her. I need you advice on a few issues, guys;
- How do I communicate that her original idea is rather basic (and that I wouldn't want it to be seen as something that I 'created')
- That she hired me to design her a logo, not trace one
- That the branding process is more than replicating the original mockup
- That 'less is more' and that the heart inside the o is a little bit overused and not very visually interesting
Thanks for reading this, I'd really like some feedback, because I don't want to sound rude or pretentious in my email and drive her away because of this
I'll keep it as brief as I can. I graduated little over two years ago with a degree in graphic design and illustration. I am struggling to find work and am still stuck in my part time retail job. Recently, via Twitter, I was able to get my first real client. She wants a logo for her photography website. The name is 'Love Photography' and she sent me a basic mockup of what she wants it to look like. It was simply both words typed in a handwritten font and a heart inside the letter O. I asked her what she photographs, what tone she wants her brand to exude and for examples that she likes. After three different drafts of at least 12 different designs each time, she was quite hard to get any feedback out of. Recently, due to personal reasons, I was unable to work on it and sent her an email to keep her updated. After a few days, I sent her a more refined idea with a few variations. I had changed the letter O to be both a heart and a camera lens. In my email, I detailed the concept, showed several fonts that I had downloaded specifically for the project and asked for some feedback. The very next day, she replied with a very short email with the original mockup attached, saying 'please recreate this in black on white and white on black.'
Now, I'm not that amazing at logo design and like I say have never had a client before, so I can't afford to lose her. I need you advice on a few issues, guys;
- How do I communicate that her original idea is rather basic (and that I wouldn't want it to be seen as something that I 'created')
- That she hired me to design her a logo, not trace one
- That the branding process is more than replicating the original mockup
- That 'less is more' and that the heart inside the o is a little bit overused and not very visually interesting
Thanks for reading this, I'd really like some feedback, because I don't want to sound rude or pretentious in my email and drive her away because of this