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Hi, I am a student, currently studying Graphic Design. My assignment brief was to design 2D and 3D shop signage for a fake business. I have created the attached signage items, including a poster, a wall vinyl decal, shop front lettering and a facade sign. I am looking for feedback on what works and what doesn't on these mock ups. Thank you for your assistance. :)
 

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I'm rather liking that.

I think on a couple the kerning seems tighter and I like that better.
Also like it better on the black background. :D
 
Not sure why but I'm getting a mobile phone company vibe... I want to say EE but it might be adverts from another one that it's reminding me of.

And for me personally I think I'd prefer the 3D facade branding (3rd one) to be 'perfect lettering' rather than the sketched outline, the sketch outline to be me looks a little 'cheap' in that context.
 
I'm with Levi, the hand-drawn font doesn't work for me. Is 'Better Together' the brand? It reads more like a tag line
Can it be called something else?
 
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