Feedback please

[Ben338]

Hello,

I would appreciate any opinions you have on this, it's for a motocross decal company (hence the tyre-like circle).

 

[bigdave]

The words '100% quality' and 'decals' look like an afterthought.

 

[PrintME]

The words '100% quality' and 'decals' look like an afterthought.

i agree

 

[Ben338]

Hmm ok, i see what you mean. It seems that if I make more of them then they just detract from the rest. I'll try something else, cheers

 

[Ben338]

Updated

 

[hankscorpio]

Lose the gradients.

 

[Paul Murray]

Sort these problem areas caused by your stroke



*Edit*

Also, just noticed a tiny groove below the 'S' in 'DECALS'. Sort that one too.

 

[Ben338]

Thanks for the comments! Updated attached

 

[Ben338]

Something is wrong with the Decals part, can't figure out what

 

[bigdave]

Id say the word decals doesnt fill the space well enough.

 

[zaksingle]

Something is wrong with the Decals part, can't figure out what

Might be that the cut out doesn't follow the 'D'. Like the progress you've made. Don't like the font on premium/having 3 fonts. What about moving the Premium above Racecraft and in the same font and style as Decals?