Thanks for all the feedback, too many people to thank!
Firstly, I must say, I can take criticism, its the reason I posted my website etc here, I want to make it better and you guys have the knowledge to help me do that.
Secondly, it was designed on my old old old laptop, 15 inch monitor, 1024x768... I have recently been bought a beast of a PC, 22 Inch monitor, Quad core, 8gbs of RAM etc, and I am looking at revising my website, stationary etc with this.
Website:
Berry is correct, it is Gill Sans, would anyone be able to suggest a replacement font, I like the clean lines of Gill, but as a few people have suggested its not very readable. I will also look into revising the grid size and making more white space between the sections.
As for the portfolio, my website skills are minimal, only stuff I have taught my self, the idea was to link to the dA Portfolio - Unbranded addition, I just haven't got round to sorting this out, as I am currently working full time, only 2 more days to go though!
Logo: I really wanted to design a logo, but I have no idea what to do (when it comes to my own personally work, I seem to get tunnel vision, with clients work I am as creative as Walt Disney!) Maybe some really nice sort of handwritten logo with my name in?
CV: I mentioned I had stripped down my CV from 8 pages to 2, can I continue to strip even more details out of it, and still land clients and jobs?
Sorry for the lengthy reply, I feel like I am 80% there and with your advice, I can nail this properly.
Cheers!