Feedback on Corporate Flyers please

WFRIEDL2020

New Member
Greetings! Please take a look at these flyers, which I need to send out before the end of this week. Any positive feedback/suggestions to enhance the materials?
 

WFRIEDL2020

New Member
Greetings! Please take a look at these flyers, which I need to send out before the end of this week. Any positive feedback/suggestions to enhance the materials?

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hankscorpio

Moderator
Staff member
Space it out - even if it adds more pages. You won't be able to read the diagram on the bottom left - it would be too small and problematic in print due to white at such small sizes.
That diagram could nearly be a page on it's own or occupy the 2nd/3rd columns and push everything else on.

It's crammed, squashed, illegible.

Text justification is all over the place - you've got rivers in your text - https://opusdesign.us/wordcount/graphic-design-tip-removing-rivers-and-working-with-justified-text

By the looks of it it's going to be a 6 page DL - I would highly recommend adding more pages and making it a 12 pg or 16 pg DL that's saddle-stitched.
 

Levi

Moderator
Staff member
Yeah everything just feels to cramped, the text needs breathing room imo so things like space between borders and text, line spacing etc need to be looked at.
 

fisicx

Active Member
Greetings! Please take a look at these flyers, which I need to send out before the end of this week. Any positive feedback/suggestions to enhance the materials?
Flyers for who?

Where are they being sent to? Who will be the recipients? What is the purpose of the flyers?

If that was given to me I probably would get past the first page. It's cramped and doesn't have any real impact.

It needs to be a lot simpler and refer the reader to resources where they can find out more.
 
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