Egg Nog

[Inkling]

Hello. I'm looking for some feedback on a project I've done for school. It's the redesign for some egg nog packaging (I'm originally from Canada, and egg nog is a very popular Christmas drink there).
This is the original packaging.


I repackaged it so that it's in cartons which is the most common way to package eggnog. I did this because egg nog can actually look quite off putting and having it in a clear bottle just shows off the gross aspect of the product. I used some hand drawn elements in the packaging (the pattern) because the key word for my project was "handmade".


Here is a final mockup.



I would really appreciate a critique. Feel free to be brutally honest. Thanks.

 

[Paul Murray]

I like it. It's festive, without being too Christmassy.

 

[hankscorpio]

It's very classy and would stand out easily on the shelf as a high end product.

 

[@GCarlD]

very classy

 

[PriyeshDesign]

Interesting concept, appealing - looks like premium Egg Nog :icon_biggrin:

I would soften the flourish pattern, just a little.
And perhaps experiment with adding the raw ingredient image like those pieces of chocolate to the chocolate Egg Nog package.

Other than that, it's portfolio worthy!

 

[bigdave]

It looks great and would certainly look at home on a shelf with other high end products... However, I would have to question if the 'high end' finish meets the 'hand made' brief?