First page looks like a mistake as it's virtually blank - like the PDF is not rendering correctly.
It might be your grammar which is a turn off
"aswell", "alot", "Im"
This is a disaster!
MY PROFILE
FROM AN EARLY AGE I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN INTERESTED IN ART & DESIGN AND AS I HAVE GROWN UP
MY INTERESTS WITHIN IT HAVE CHANGED. GRAPHIC DESIGN HAS BECOME A PASSION OF MINE AFTER
DISCOVERING MORE ABOUT IT DURING COLLEGE AND THEN GOING TO STAFFS UNI TO BECOME A
GRADUATE IN THE FIELD.
DURING MY TIME AT UNIVERSITY I GOT OFFERED A YEARS PLACEMENT AT ALPS PRINT & DESIGN WHERE
I BECAME A FULL TIME JUNIOR GRAPHIC DESIGNER AND PART TIME TEA BOY. BESIDES FROM MASTERING
THE ART OF MAKING TEA FOR ALL THE STAFF I WORKED ON REBRANDING THE WHOLE COMPANY
ASWELL AS WORKING ON ACCOUNTS SUCH AS PHARMACEUTICAL COMPANIES, RESTAURANTS ‘N’ BARS
AND CORPORATE OUTFITS. ALPS TAUGHT ME ALOT ABOUT PRINT AND DESIGN AND I STILL REMAIN IN
CONTACT WITH THEM, FREELANCING MY SERVICES.
OUTSIDE EMPLOYMENT IM KNOWN AS THE ‘GADGET MAN’, THE REASON BEING I LIKE TO KEEP MYSELF
UP TO DATE WITH THE LATEST TRENDS IN THE TECH WORLD AND ALSO THE GUY IN THE FAMILY WHO
EVERYONE COMES TO, TO GET THERE LAPTOPS WORKING OR SOFTWARE UPDATED WHETHER IT BE FOR
MAC OR PC.
I LOVE FIGURING OUT PROBLEMS AND SEARCHING FOR NEW THINGS TO DO AND SPARE TIME FOR ME
CAN BE WATCHING YOUTUBE TUTORIALS ON THE LATEST THINGS PHOTOSHOP CAN DO OR WHAT THE
WORLD CAN OFFER ME.
Completely hard to read and when read it's appalling.
Especially the highlighted bold parts.
Youtube is not a viable source for learning anything! It shows complete laziness if anything else - better off doing courses at credible centers.
Photoshop is not a one-stop-shop for design! It's far too overused and completely the wrong tool for creating a lot of design work. It's great for editing photos - but unless you understand Print and Design to an absolute "T" you are threading very dangerous waters of being completely un-hireable!
Rewrite
At an early age I developed an interest in Art & Design, my idealogies of Art & Design has evolved as I have learned more and more. Art & Design is a passion that is continually developing through my time at College {insert name of College} and attending many "Staff Unis" {what are these?} and became a graduate in the field {insert name of field}
At the time I was attending University I was offered a years placement at Alps Print & Design where after a successful period I was promoted to a full time Junior Graphic Designer.
{Leave out the Tea Boy!!! why that's there is a mystery!} During this time Alps and Print & Design were executing a rebrand of their image, where I was involved on a daily basis working closely with the experienced staff I was able to apply and learn various aspects of a rebranding for company. After my tenure as Junior Graphic Designer ended at the agreed time, I continued to work with Alps Print and Design as a Freelance Designer.
At my leisure I am very interested in the latest trends in technology and I like to keep up-to-date on the latest trends of the latest gadgets.
{A company usually has an IT department - stating you fix computers won't go down well you're applying for Graphics job, not IT.}
I am an avid problem solver in my day-to-day life and this skill can really transcend into graphic design as each design challenge requires me to think outside the box and be unique in my solutions. {prepare some real life scenarios when this was the case, no need to have them in the CV}
Also - I was unable to find a single logo in your portfolio online, nor the "Alps Print and Design company"?