business card design critique

[someguy]

Hi all,

Got some great advice on some early business card designs from this forum, went away and worked on one of the designs and two new ones.

Could I ask for some more feedback?

Let me know which front and back you prefer (if any) and if there's anything you would change / swap around.

Thank you,

 

[hankscorpio]

Front A - does nothing for me.
Back A - distressed text at this size will be difficult to print

Front B - Nightmare to print
Back B - Nightmare to print

Front C - Can barely make out ME - not sure what the symbol in front of it all is for? - Background would be difficult to replicated digitally each time in printing (consistently)
Back C - same comment in regard to printing issues.



I like the design of Back C - but I'd go with all white or all black background.

I like the design of Front A - but it feels grossly unfinished.

 

[Cloud Anarchy]

From all of these i highly prefer A. Even tho it feels unfinished and kinda empty.
I would like something more going on there its a bit plain.

 

[someguy]

Thanks for the feedback Hank. Had another play around with a mock-up and tried to make it seem more finished. Do you think this looks better?