It is a pretty picture. But there's a great idea bursting to come out. And then it would be a lot more than just a pretty picture. If I was you, I'd get a black marker pen and a pad, and sketch out some ideas and thoughts. Then go on the Mac and play with Photoshop if you like. But get the idea right first. I assumed it was a poster, or an ad or something because you've put text on it. If not, lose the text and just have the product shot and the logo.