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Wood / Paper effect Business Card

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by wayneambler, May 10, 2012.

  1. wayneambler

    wayneambler New Member

    **UPDATED** **14/05/2012**

    I have updated my card to a completely different look altogether so please let me know what you think

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    Thank You

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  2. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    well unless you can click on the buttons, there's no point in the twitter buttons are there...
     
  3. balders

    balders Member

    It says more French polisher then graphic designer to me.
     
  4. Squiddy

    Squiddy Guest

    The font you've chosen doesn't really say graphic designer to me, it looks a little too much like papyrus for my liking.
     
  5. balders

    balders Member

  6. Matthew Crowe

    Matthew Crowe New Member

    ^ You shouldn't use a wooden texture which would be printed. Instead print onto wood like balders suggested. The quality will look so much better.
     
  7. marble_pars

    marble_pars Junior Member

    I would imagine the actual card would look pretty cheap and nasty, business cards are small and compact you need to keep them minimal and get your skills across instantly. Also the font looks very generic.
     
  8. GilmoreVisuals

    GilmoreVisuals Active Member

    I agree with everything said above. Don't feel beaten down though- work on it!

    Just to echo one main point, that would be keeping it simple. If you really want to use the wood texture I would use it throughout the whole card and remove the paper. In any case, printing on a nice solid textured card would also be a good idea. The font like has already been said must be changed.

    Let us know if you make improvements :)
     
  9. wayneambler

    wayneambler New Member

    **updated**
     
  10. marble_pars

    marble_pars Junior Member

    I still think even with the alternative background the paper, fonts and layout just seem wrong & overcrowded. Why don't you have a double sided card?
     
  11. wayneambler

    wayneambler New Member

    **updated**
     

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