In one way the triple banking has made it look more logo-like, but something about the right alignment makes the words harder for me to focus on because of the different vertical starting points on each line.
I like the simplicity of the versions in your earlier posts, but now you've put the box around "twothirds", the emphasis is starting to sit in a more comfortable place for me.
There are three 'thirds' to your name. In the designs you have a different variation of the text for each third (i.e light/coloured/bold or light/bold/italic.
Based on that, my thoughts are considering your name, perhaps it might lend itself better if the emphasis is more: twothirdsmedia (i.e using only two text variations as opposed to three)
as opposed to the emphasis sitting more towards the end: