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What is your opinion about this two poster?

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by tooraj, Jul 17, 2016.

  1. tooraj

    tooraj New Member

    Hi
    This two poster is about marketing.
    Middle sentence is Persian that means it is the selling graphic products Online. This sentence should translate to English because it is incorrect. Except this sentence language that it makes a mistake please you say to me this two design problem. I want a list of problems of this two poster.
    Thank you very much

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  2. Christa Elrod

    Christa Elrod New Member

    Try to change the gradient color in the first poster.
     
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  3. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    In my opinion it's lacking an understanding of the fundamentals of design
    Sub headings are all different sizes, this gives greater emphasis to some more than others when I assume they're all supposed to be equal on the site.
    You've got background text which is quite prominent in terms of strength of colour/opacity etc
    Multiple issues with 'white space' to allow items to breath
    Using what is now dated 'glossy' elements
     
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