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What do you think of this?

Discussion in 'Website Design Critique:' started by danieljoseph, Jul 9, 2014.

  1. danieljoseph

    danieljoseph New Member

    Hey,

    I've been working on a site for my b-boy crew and have this so far - http://www.factionbreakdancecrew.com/

    Wanted to know if there was anything i'm missing or anything important that i should change (particularly with my coding)?

    I'm self/Google taught and don't have any other web designers around me so I heavily rely on reviews and feedback to keep developing.

    Really appreciate your time.
     
  2. GilmoreVisuals

    GilmoreVisuals Active Member

    I'm sure you don't :)
     
  3. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    I'll let someone else review it first, I'm feeling generous.... :)

    Can you give us a bit more info about the site, obviously it's for a 'dance crew' but what do you want the site to portray.
     
  4. danieljoseph

    danieljoseph New Member

    Alex - Not sure on which bit your referring to... I guess your a man of few words!

    Levi - I want the site to portray what we do and what we offer.
     
  5. GilmoreVisuals

    GilmoreVisuals Active Member

    Hey Daniel - usually people who post a single time don't come back to read the feedback, hence the above comment.

    I think we need more info in general but as far as I see it:
    - The photo quality of the first image isn't that good
    - The moving text in the lower bar is a bit old feel
    - Having the navigation bar on the left makes it (to me) feel a bit bare
    - I like the responsiveness
    - The animations when you click on a page are quite 'cheesy'
    - On the entertainment page, you could make the content more engaging by having them as 3 columns rather than 3 rows as it just looks like a wall of text at the moment
    - Apart from the landing page, the others should look different before the top part out of the first 3 pages is exactly the same

    Just some thoughts. Also, how are you building this?
     
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  6. Steeph

    Steeph New Member

    I agree!
     
  7. danieljoseph

    danieljoseph New Member

    Hey Alex

    Thanks for having a look.

    Some points I really agree with there. We're hoping to get some more good quality images done soon so we can change the top image and have a different image on each page.

    I know what you mean about the news feed. I'm thinking of making it a text slider rather than using css animation so i can have more than one news update. I think this will make look less 'old fashioned'.

    Also gonna get some social network integration in there somewhere.

    Created using Dreamweaver.

    Thanks again. :)
     
  8. GilmoreVisuals

    GilmoreVisuals Active Member

    Cool. Also, when using social media, I'd say it's better to have no social media than a social media that is not up to date. (ie: make sure you plan to post on it regularly otherwise it can shoot back on you.
     
  9. watson

    watson New Member

    I like it - but the image quality of the main photo on the homepage isn't very high. Could you possibly upload another higher-quality image? Also, the scrolling text at the bottom - not a big fan of that. Takes a while to read the whole sentence.

    I actually like the animation as one switches from one page to another. - makes it look slick and I think it conveys the brand very well (then again, I'm not the world's greatest dancer so perhaps I'm not the right person to say that, hehe).
     

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