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Vintage Toy Logo for a Client

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by donutcreative, Sep 21, 2012.

  1. donutcreative

    donutcreative New Member


    I just produced a logo for a client, just looking for a little bit of feedback and some opinions.

    I personally dont think its quite finshed and needs some more work.

    View image: Mjtoys


  2. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    It looks alright, but have you thought about how that's going to work when you have to cram it into a Twitter avatar or something like that?

    It's fairly high in both detail and texture to be recognisable at a glance.
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  3. Corrosive

    Corrosive Moderator Staff Member

    I like it but agree with Tony about simplicity. Perhaps investigate how you'd do a 'stripped back' version for Twitter/Facebook and even a website favicon.
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  4. dedwardp

    dedwardp Member

    I think it looks great but, as above, there will be instances where all of the effects aren't going to work.

    Create a black and white copy and then apply solid colours to that from there. This one is great for use when the logo is a larger format, but having it in its most basic of form will undoubtedly prove useful, further down the line at least.
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  5. NUGFX

    NUGFX Member

    its nice, i like the look, give me a feel of vintage toys, but as said above about the rescale,
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  6. gemznunn

    gemznunn New Member

    It's a beautiful logo in it's current size. The only thing I would change is the type on the ribbon. I'd make it bigger.

    I agree with the other poster about it's scalability. You definitely should to try it out in black and white and at different sizes.
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  7. donutcreative

    donutcreative New Member

    Thanks for the comments & feedback very appreciated. I have gathered from most of the replies that I need to make a simplified version, and make the text slightly bigger on the banner :)
  8. diehardtwo

    diehardtwo New Member

    Well, im not a graphic designer, but from a laymens point of view I think it looks amazing. Nice work.

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