Today created a new banner
- Thread starter Omer Sipra
- Start date
What is this?
Omer Sipra
Member
It is a promotion banner for a web design company called Raster Base. This is the company I work for.
Ross mccluskey
Member
Hi,
Are you looking for this to be critiqued?
Are you looking for this to be critiqued?
Omer Sipra
Member
Of course
Ross mccluskey
Member
A few things I would change;
- First off, I dont really know where to look first or what your trying to sell. There needs to be a promonent sales message to engage the user.
- Limit the amount of fonts you are using, its seems like you are using 2, maybe 3 fonts.
- You could also limit the amount of colours too. The two different yellows isnt working for me.
- I would opt for the icons all to be in one colour and remove the boxes. This could also be run across 2 lines, which would give you more space to have some sort of sales message.
- The Call to Action button & logo placement seems a bit odd to me
- Could you add a shadow beneath the monitor as it just looks like its been cutout and dropped on.
Cheers
Do you have permission from Dell to use their monitor in your advert?