You need to work on hierarchy, dude. It's super heavy on the right, your fonts are unreadable. I have no idea how you could make this better until you've worked on some sizing issues. Maybe some of the other guys can help.
As Shauna has pointed out, there are some glaring issue with the sizes of your text and the font used is not a good choice. It's great that you're so into this, but have you considered taking some time to actually learn the basics of logo design? What steps have you taken so far to get to this point and what kind of studying have you done on the subject?