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Review my portfolio work

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by touseefdesigner, Aug 4, 2010.

  1. touseefdesigner

    touseefdesigner Junior Member

  2. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    hmmm, wonder if this person will come back.....

    I hate the intro animation/voice over and you got my location wrong.
     
  3. probably not.. not to sound pessimistic :p
     
  4. Tom Sound

    Tom Sound Active Member

    I love the way you've got Victor Kiam doing the voice over. Really welcoming :up:
     
  5. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    "Order a site withing the next 10 minutes and get the exfoliating sponge for FREE! Call the number on your screen now!"

    [​IMG]

    This isn't 2001, you know? Right-clicking is okay now, but table-based designs aren't. Your stylesheet should be external, and so should your javascript.

    Code:
    </span> <!-- end mainbody div --> 
    What div? That's a span!

    Code:
    <li class="bli">Printing</li> <li class="bli">Web Design</li> <li class="bli">Multimedia</li> <li class="bli">Photography</li> <li class="bli">Set Designing</li> 
    How about wrapping this in <ul> tags?

    Code:
    <table style="padding:0px;margin:0px;height:21px;"
    Inline styling? Very fashionable.

    Code:
    <center></center>
    That tag is deprecated.

    You're using the XHTML 1.0 Strict doctype. But obviously you have no idea what you're doing, I'm surprised you managed to get it validated. Also, I hope you're thinking 'omg how the hell did he find our source code" because I bet you added the no-right-click script to hide your miserable coding.

    You've got some decent design work, I'll give you that, but this site is laughable! [​IMG]
     
  6. BenJonesDesign

    BenJonesDesign Active Member

    Ahhh must kill voice over.....

    For me the flash screen should be a welcome screen intro with the option to skip. As it is at the moment you want to just go on and click to see the portfolio, the flash screen to me seems like an annoying distraction. If it was a welcome screen, the only thing people see when entering the site, I think it may make the site flow better.
     
  7. smellypunks

    smellypunks New Member

    Don't much like the voice speaking soon as you get to the site. While with some testing it might prove to be a good way to get people to stay a little longer the first time they come to the site, they are not going to want to here that every time they go; in fact it might stop them going!
     

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