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Quick Critique please!


Paul Murray

Moderator
Staff member
#2
I'm not really sure how we're supposed to critique or what to suggest. I quite like the font but it's quite obvious it was made in a matter of minutes.
 
#3
I'm not really sure how we're supposed to critique or what to suggest. I quite like the font but it's quite obvious it was made in a matter of minutes.
Well, thanks for the reply!
I'm not a graphic designer - I'm a computer tech.

I'm guessing I'm just asking how YOU'D make it better; I'm not after a re-design as that'd be asking you for work.
Just some pointers, like: The mark is too big/small, the lowercase doesn't work etc.

Hope this helps you help me! :)
 

jooty

Active Member
#4
it looks dated. boring and generic.

type needs some treatment, tightening i think. I think it needs some relevance, in some way. You're not going to really get the suggestions you're after. :(
 
#5
it looks dated. boring and generic.

type needs some treatment, tightening i think. I think it needs some relevance, in some way. You're not going to really get the suggestions you're after. :(
Don't worry about it!
I'll get learning how to you use the path tool correctly and try doing a Web 2.0 style logo.

Thanks for the tips though.