Hey, thanks for taking the time to reply with such a detailed response. Yeah the shoulder and neck area was a bit tricky for me haha but I'll work at it. ThanksI ran out of time to edit my first reply, so here is an addendum… Perhaps even just deepening the shadow a bit on the left of her face/neck might help. The modeling of the shoulder could do with being improved so it is clearer that it is the nearest part to the viewer. Hope this helps.